Not bad, but...
The overall animation and story were quite good. That being said, however, I just have to point out that a lot of the imagery and dialouge were cliched to the point of being hackneyed, so much so that the viewer is able to anticipate not only what will be said but the way in which the characters will look saying it. Mix it up a little by using new script and orginal scenes and you have yourself a winner.